Adding more detail to our writing!

Our writing focus at the moment is to add more detail to our writing - this will help us explain! This site will help shows us how we can 'expand' more information into a piece of writing.

What's it called when we give more information about something? It starts with 'E'. - ELABORATE!

Here is our 'elaboration; about what Hauora is. The four photos show how we expanded the sentence - Hauora is about four walls.

Here is reading the written explanation of Hauora! Great ELABORATION!